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Romance Poetry
Because Of Him
I wanted to move the stars for you to do anything to make you smile to hear you speak those words that I long sought after. I wanted to know that you kept me close to your own heart just as I did for you.by =midnight-eclipses
I still read those messages; to see them on my phone is a blunt reminder that someone can still get hurt over a few words A few careless words because someone was "too" afraid to be a man but instead, stood in shadows to be a coward.
You reminded me that a heart can still be broken even if it had taken years to mend. Here, I've ripped it o
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I hope this critique is helpful, because in all honestly, I am NOT an artist. I'm going to start off with some positive before...
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Now, I'm not an artist (just a humble writer. ^.^) so this is a new idea for me to do. I must say, I did like this piece. It�...
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For Preston Please Say GoodbyeI'm always lying awake wondering if I made the right choices that led me to where I'm now and I wonder dwelling on the past thoughts of what would've been what could have been and I'm hoping that maybe someday you'll understand that the things I said the things I did were to put myself here in the arms of someone I love.For Preston Please Say Goodbye
Your thoughts are like the rain they splash down, soaking me to my soul and I'm wondering do you cry yourself to sleep thinking of all the things that we could've done to make things work out but I don't wonder a
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i paint my elbows green in class it feels like a prettier poemby *ohsostarryeyed
give me your ugly heart- my shoes rub blisters into my heels and what do you make of love, listen to me say please and thank you with every sorry breath between
we can walk together in the cold and shiver our bones together it's the rain or the intimacy and God, i am scared of you some days you are too much
let me be a jane doe in your heart an unwanted a forgotten an untouchable
make me feel beautiful you are the only one who can i am filli
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