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I'm still laying here, after probably what I assume is 60 hours and counting. The room is still dark; I haven't seen daylight in a long time. And, for once, my heart seems to turn in my tiny little chest, filling my small body with fear.

"I don't want to be stuck here!" I scream, begging and pleading, hoping someone will find me locked away in this horrible little place. I whimper, fear gripping my lungs now. I can't seem to calm down; to let loose and let my relaxation start.

"Sixty hours is too much! Please, let me out!" I squeal again, my voice raising higher and higher, stressing the fact that I wanted out! I began rolling around, knocking into things, turning organized piles into unorganized piles of crap.

I whimper, rolling more and more, until I can't move anymore. I'm tangled in something, wrapped up tight. Suddenly, I'm being flown forward, knocking my little feet into a block of solid Oak wood.

"Oh! Thank you, thank you! Now, please free me from here!" I gasp in pleasure, staring up at the person's big beady eye. But, my voice is muffled as a hand suddenly closes around my little form.

Can you guess what I am?
:iconmidnight-eclipses:

Author's Comments

[ September 2009
Write a story from the point of view of something that would not normally have thoughts, let alone be the main character in a story. Basically, use personification to turn something everyday into a masterpiece! Write the story of a Geisha fan, take a pencil for a whirl, or anything else you could think of. The possibilities are endless.
Personification... inanimate objects or abstractions are given human qualities or are represented as possessing human form.

Written for the ProsePrompts
]

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:iconmizuyo:
a clock, or something in a clock?
:iconmidnight-eclipses:
Nope. A pen ^.^

--
[Love is never simple
But, believing is and if you believe
in the one that you truly love
then, everything's going to be ok.
]
:iconmizuyo:
ah, that makes more sense.
:iconmidnight-eclipses:
=) ^.^ But I'm glad you guessed. :D

--
[Love is never simple
But, believing is and if you believe
in the one that you truly love
then, everything's going to be ok.
]
:iconmizuyo:
:D and thanks for the devwatch!
:iconmidnight-eclipses:
=) You're welcome. I like making new friends. ^.^

--
[Love is never simple
But, believing is and if you believe
in the one that you truly love
then, everything's going to be ok.
]
:iconmidnight-eclipses:
^.^

--
[Love is never simple
But, believing is and if you believe
in the one that you truly love
then, everything's going to be ok.
]

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